Welcome, Kent28! This is very cute - and, as Carol said, you've got the characterisations spot on. Lois's babble, insistent demands and relationship with Clark is just right.
And I loved the revelation. But... what next? What's she going to say to him? Is he going to escape unscathed? I think you need to get back here and post some more.
Wendy
I can't say it better!
