Welcome Marcy!
I really love this! What a way to debut, seriously! Ditto what everyone's already said. AWESOME revelation and characterization!
Okay, have to comment on this, I especially loved it:
And to make things even more difficult for him, it seemed his libido had no sense of proper timing as memories of Lois' dance of the seven veils would spring to mind at odd occasions, most uncomfortably when she went into full Lane rant mode.
That is so cute and sweet!!!
I think I see a part 2 posted!! AH! Off to check it out!
~NICOLE
