Oh-my-goodness! I
need more story Anti-Kryptonite!
. This is going to be a lllloooonnnngggg week till you post again.
It's so easy to become emotionally invested in your stories--to feel like you are right there with the characters experiencing all the emotions that they are feeling. Like Virginia stated, I was tired after Lois' journey. And, by the end of this section, it felt like the weight of these last four months was on my shoulders, also. It's amazing how you can create
such a connnetion for the reader
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Hmmm. I'm guessing everyone has a room? Jimmy in his. Lois in hers. Martha and Jonathan in the other. And Clark in the one with the lock. That's not to say that Clark, Martha, and Jonathan are
in their rooms, but it seems like there is definitely a place for everyone. The imagery was beautiful throughout the end--that lock on the door...the door potentially being all that separated Lois from Clark. The feeling that they are so close, but yet really SO far. And also the room...I'm guessing that Clark set it up for her. He knows her better than anyone--I can't see Jimmy/James putting it all together. Lois finding the teddy bear was probably my tipping point. That's when I was
really feeling everything for Lois. That bear is a symbol of a happier time. A shift in their friendship that I always have felt happened when Lois really let Clark 'in' to her life when they visited Smallville.
Hoping that Clark is in that room. And I'm completely wondering if he is aware that Lois is there now, so close to him. Does he hear her heartbeat? Does he hear her cry?
Wow--just really wanting to read more
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Laura
Oh--the burgundy comforter. Was that just a color you happened to choose? Just made me think of color conversations from Lucky Leon--though that ep is after this timeframe. Anyway, in my mind, I added that in to the personalizing of the room
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