Yea! Part 5!
This section is ridiculously sexy - the fact that you're able to generate such an undercurrent of heat between two people that aren't even in the same room is a testament to your writing ability.
He could perfectly imagine the taut line of her legs, and how the shirt would rise as she lifted her arms. How much of her legs did it reveal? If he was there, would he catch a glimpse of her panties?
So freakin' hot!
I love the confrontation between Superman and Clark...great tension! You really nailed Lex' speech pattern - I could totally hear John Shea in my head.
the rat fink had clearly blabbed to Clark
Love this! Some of that shine seems to be wearing off the superhero.
Even though it was black and white, and Clark wasn't looking directly at the camera, she could still picture his eyes perfectly, how they crinkled at the corners whenever he laughed.
Brilliantly vivid description...Mmmmmmmm...
Oh, lord...the sleepware discussion. Hubba hubba! My mind has permanently fixated on the image!
"Which phone are you using?" Clark's voice had dropped to a husky rumble, and the low pitch of it reverberated through her as if a tuning fork had just been struck.
HOT DAMN!!!
My mind has permanently fixated on the sound of his voice!
Her cheeks flushed hot and her heart started to pound wildly. What in the world had possessed her to tell him she was wearing nothing but boxers?
I know! (Even if Lois doesn't yet!)
are you sure you don't want to elaborate a nfic appendix for this story?
Mind is currently heading towards the gutter
Well, I happen to know that an insanely erotic, mind-meltingly hot N-fic scene is sitting on her hard drive (and my inbox!) right now.
She doesn't think people would really want to read the special treat she wrote for me, though. Maybe more story feedback would change her mind.
