Ooooh! Love it!
Very entertaining despite inclusion of the dreaded Jar Jar. I did get a little lost on who the cops were at the end, but then again, I refused to watch SW Episodes 1-3 more than once, they were so awful. (Anikan's sins for massacring a school full of children puts Darth Vader on a level beyond forgiveness; however, I digress.) I love all the in-jokes and humor in your story. I enjoyed your other story on the other thread as well. Keep it up!
