It looks as if we're able to post again
So, here is the FDK I wrote earlier in it's entirety (and then some).
I love the Incredibles! (Even more so since I've fallen in love with Clark -- wait. Did I write that outloud?
) You did a great job of showing the movie from the two different POVs. One - the boys - what a fun film! And the other, from Clark/Superman worried about the safety of his family. You struck just the right kind of balance between the two. Although, I was a bit surprised that the Jack-Jack gets powers scenes didn't freak him out.
I especially enjoyed seeing Clark spend some quality time with his sons. What a great dad! Funny that both boys wanted to be Frozone instead of Incredible.
I had always wanted to write something along this theme (Clark vs. the Incredibles) but it never solidified in my mind. I must applaud your triumphant efforts here
as this is better than any plot I considered!
Well done and very enjoyable!
