Yes, there absolutely
has to be more! He can't let her just walk out like that believing that she's not good enough for him! And there's no way that he'd let her, now that she's told him that she loves him
Wow! This was so, so good! The emotions just leapt off the screen! I was reading along, thinking 'yes, yes, I can see this, I can imagine him thinking/saying that', and then suddenly you just caught me right in my heart with this:
You don't want to fall for me, Farmboy," she said shakily, her eyes on Clark's hands holding her own. "I'm broken." Her eyes closed for a moment. "And I don't think you can fix me," she whispered.
Clark's heart constricted.
He leaned in close, his lips barely brushing her ear.
"Let me try," he breathed, his voice eliciting a shiver of longing that rippled through Lois.
Lois's words brought a lump to my throat. Clark's reply made
me shiver too. Excellent, excellent writing!
So, come on, we need a part 2 - and then we need more from you!
Welcome to the wonderful world of Lois and Clark fanfiction writing! And may there be many more stories from your keyboard in the new year!
Wendy
