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You don't want to fall for me, Farmboy," she said shakily, her eyes on Clark's hands holding her own. "I'm broken." Her eyes closed for a moment. "And I don't think you can fix me," she whispered.
Oof!

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"Let me try," he breathed, his voice eliciting a shiver of longing that rippled through Lois.
Holy cow, double oof!

This is fantastic. I love your storytelling and it is just a wonderful, wonderful first fic. I'm counting on your promise of a sequel! I can't wait to read more from you in the future.

Chriscy