Originally Posted by cuidadora
I absolutely love your version of this scene. As Mike mentioned, you've combined humor and dramatic tension beautifully. The imagery of flowers, fire and later the chill accompanying the cold Superman woven into Lois's introspection and awareness of her feelings is brilliant. [...]

You've painted a wonderful story with your words. clap

Welcome to posting your first L&C story!
Thank you for your kind words and your gentle prompts that improved this story... folc4evernday and you know how much I'm indebted to you both... hail

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Your detail of the muted colors of her clothes mirroring the brighter colors of Superman's uniform is priceless.thumbsup
Well... What amused me is that Lois thought the colors clashed together when she was wearing them, but wasn't as critical when applied to the brighter version of Superman's suit!