This was really sweet. I like how Superman calmed down and stayed so Lois could vent at him. Sometimes what we really need is to have someone just listen while we verbally work out our thoughts and feelings.
The descriptions of Superman and his demeanor are very evocative. You do a great job of showing his emotions without getting inside his head and showing how Lois's thoughts about him change over the course of their discussion.
"It is a remarkable dichotomy. In many ways, Clark is the most human of us all. Then...he shoots fire from the skies, and it is difficult not to think of him as a god. And how fortunate we all are that it does not occur to him." -Batman (in Superman/Batman #3 by Jeph Loeb)
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