Would Clark make her change their byline to Kent and Lane?
ROTFLOL!!!!
Okay, they still need to slow down a bit, I can see that. So I won't pester you with the suggestion that I so frequently make to pretty much all the writers on these boards, I promise you I won't...
But, you are still not getting away from me that easily. Hey, you
could have made Clark reveal his Superman identity to Lois here, couldn't you? Hmmmm?
Otherwise, Squirky, this is a lovely first fic! I really, really liked it! So, you come back here with more stories soon, you hear? Hey, you owe me a revelation piece now, you know!
Ann