Beautiful job as always, Vicki! It's always nice to read different takes on BaTP/HOL arc revelations. You always do a great job painting the scene.
Happy Easter!
(Sidenote: LOL at you having to post more than once to get it all in there)

Thanks, Val! And thanks for making sure Lois and Clark weren't *too* mean to each other in this one!
Also, my muse doesn't know the meaning of "short" story lately.