Originally Posted by JellyS2
grin I love it! Thanks for writing a response to my challenge. That is one of the places where I thought an "I'm Clark Kent" reveal could totally happen. I love how you wrote her instantly feeling regretful about everything that happened. And I also like how you kept it from her POV.

Thanks, Julie! It was certainly a fun challenge to take on. That moment when she propositions Superman is SO cringeworthy, it would have served her right to have him throw the reveal in there.

I knew it had to be fully from Lois' POV - I wanted to examine her instant regret and how the knowledge of what she's done really messes with her.

Thanks for reading and I'm glad you liked it!

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