Nan, this is such a great series! Unfortunately, real life has been a pain in the you-know-where lately, so I've had to read "Supercop" in short bursts during the last several days over at the archive, and have just finished. I love love loved it — and all three chapters you've posted of Part II have been stellar!
This, in particular:
... surely, he had never been as young as the kids he was watching now, had he?
What a poignant insight; Henderson has always seemed perpetually stoic and responsible, and it's difficult to picture him as a teenager. This nails that sentiment in a simultaneously funny and sad manner.
Also, I have to echo Nicole's earlier comment about the first bit of text she quoted — lovely, just lovely. I couldn't say it better than she did.
And this cliff-hanger! Gah! What's going to happen to Norma?! Post your next chapter soon, please.
