Good start. You should definitely continue. I look forward to Lois and Clark meeting.
The format of the story makes it a little difficult to read. Spacing between paragraphs would help.
Hey Ann,
I'm glad you like the idea. Well, Lois and Clark will meet of course at some Point, or this wouldn't be a Lois & Clark fanfic... :-) I could say more about that but I don't want to spoil anything...
About the Format: Thanks for the hint. I'll see what I can do about it. This is one of the things I just don't realize how they look like because I only see one line at once, but I'm sure this can be avoided in the future.
