Originally Posted by Penny_Lane
From the mouth of babes…………………….

Good job delivering Jon’s POV—a raw and honest perspective as seen through the eyes of a child. Jon is able to acknowledge all the emotions without discounting the hurt and sadness. Then, he simply cuts to the heart of the matter and moves forward.
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Instead, he clung to his dad and thought again how he might never let go.

We can learn a lot from this child. He quickly grasped the only thing that really mattered! And that is.....
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And everything was just…as it should be. Finally, as it should be.

All of them together, as a family.
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Thank you for sharing this story.


He is a VERY special child! I love writing from this POV but it's really challenging sometimes! eek

I love the quotes you pulled out -- those were some of my favorites as well. clap

Thank you again!

-Bek
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