Hi Michael.
Thanks again for reading and giving such detailed (and humorous) feedback.
This was my favourite bit.
Another part that fits right in with FHfic
I'm very glad (relieved!) I can still write enjoyable stories. As a writer, this story is different to anything I've ever written. All my stories in the past were an idea that begged to be written. This story began over a year ago when, nursing a badly injured knee and unable to do my farm work, I read a few LnC fics to keep the boredom at bay. Then I thought, maybe I should write something. So, I started, with no idea, no plot, no story line, and - for way too long - a blank screen. I honestly doubted it would be finished, let alone ever posted.
Thanks for the encouragement, Michael.
Corrina.