I loved getting Perry's POV to wrap up the story. Sometimes an outside perspective rings the perfect bell and you got it just right (having Perry secretly be in the know made it even better).
I didn't comment on the other chapters so let me make up for that a bit. This has been such a great read. Clark can be so stubborn. He is so self-sacrificing but he doesn't see it. Only when Lois tries to sacrifice her own career and lofe in Metropolis does he recognize how ridiculous he's being.
Glad Lois found a semi-plausible story for them to go with. Does it have holes? Sure. But people aren't going to be looking for holes.
And even if someone did and figured it out - they can get through it together.
This was a very satisfying reworking of TOGOM and I can't wait to see what you write next.
