All the original characters are interesting and add a lot of depth and intricacy to the story. You truly are doing an amazing job of bringing this story to life.
The fight scene was intense. Arc-Tal is a bully and I was hoping for a different conclusion. Clark unknowingly made Ching look bad. He still has a lot to learn. I have a feeling that Arc-Tal is now even more empowered and will continue to cause problems.
I like Devers. He’s good for Clark.
Thank you for this terrific chapter! I love this story!
