SongbirdThanks for an exciting chapter! The flashback was interesting. The duel between Polara and Zay-Il was intense. The duel was well written and I was on the edge of my chair reading it. Now we know where Nor gets his lack of character from. Definitely no honor from Zay-Il or Nor. Thankfully Nimitz was able to rescue Polara.
The duel's original outline was written nearly five years ago by the late FoLC Kenard Janney. We went back and forth about it for months and he would have been pleased to know it was appreciated. Thank you!
As I mentioned to Bakasi, there will be a posting next week. It makes me smile knowing you are enjoying this story as much as I have enjoyed writing it.
