hey you've got a great style. I love both of your stories and when I have some free-time on the weekend I will read your other story. I like it how you portrait your character and make us feel their emotions. Oh I was with Lois the whole way with discovering her emotions after smelling the shirt and discovering the suits and the same smell. Laughed a lot but I can also see why she is angry and the idea of marking him is perfect. Totally Lois, no trouble is too big for knowing the truth.
I hope my day will run so I can come back and read part 3.
