NOOOOOOOO!!! Aw poor Lois being stuck with some bad guy in the alley.
Loved the idea of "landing the lip mark" on Clark and then seeing that he and Superman are the same guy. Another idea that could have been executed in the series. Oh well.
I have to say a job well done with Lois' POV. And, of course, Sue would know all about that. Glad she was able to help you out. Very well written.
Ok so I guess I have to agree with everyone else: more kisses and please no attack in the alley. There--that's my two cents.
Lola
"We're both barefoot, both flushed, and we both look guilty as hell. Clark has finger-combed his hair but I'm positive mine looks like I was just f… fished out of the river."
<3 this fic!
'The Next Step' By Sue S.
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