I love the name GENETHICS. Great play on words!
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I like this! You make Clark so real. I hate it when everyone acts like he is never affected by his work.
Nobody asked if it was hard for him to do his rescues, nobody ever saw him weep, except Lois. He tried to hide it, like he tried to hide every pain, physical and emotional. But she saw it, she felt it and it had made her cry more than one time.
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I liked this, too. It's a part of his very being to help people.
He needed to help people like he needed air to breathe. In fact, helping people was even more vitally important for him, since he could hold his breath for about twenty minutes.
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Great story. This part flowed well!
