Sarah... this is your first story?
Wow! Wonderful. Beautiful. Welcome to the boards.
I loved the story. The emotions you invoked. I too understood Lois' pain and feelings of betrayal and yet her desire to not want to hurt him. To be angry at him and feel bad for him at the same time.
And then Clark's feelings. Very nice. How it felt like someone was reaching into his chest and squeezing his heart.
I look forward to the next part!
Oh, and you might want to pick the "blue arrow" for a message icon. Most authors use that as kind of a "flag" to catch the reader's attention to a story post. If you leave the icon as the little yellow note, the story can get lost in among the fdk threads.
Thanks Sarah!
