nice start, alicia!
great job with the opening imagery.
i like lois's idea. perfectly sensible, considering.
was a bit surprised that clark didn't agree to elope but suggest they go for the big wedding with the family afterwards. maybe it's just that that's what my parents did.
i like the discussion, especially when clark agreed a little too early.

nice final argument, too.
"Clark, being replaced by a *clone* on my *wedding day* wasn't *right*. This is *necessary*!
you know, she's got a point...
love the bit about the wedding destroyer and the guardian angel.
looking forward to the next part.
Paul