I have illegally little time these days, Sue, so....
That was lovely. Great! What a wonderful revelation prequel. Imagine having Lois tell Superman how to tell his loved one that he loves her. Imagine her instructing him on how to tell that other woman that he is Superman. And if that ungrateful, good-for-nothing bitch is too angry at him for deceiving her, well, then he can just pop over to Lois and find some consolation for being snubbed by his real love!
Like I said, brilliant. Now all we need is the
real revelation scene. Which, if you don't mind, should be posted in the nfic folder. (Or do you have some kind of bet going on with DJ that you
can post a story that has no nfic scenes....?

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Ann