Ahhhh - feedback. That sweet nectar of the gods...
I find it amusing beyond words that DJ would quote the two parts where she told me I needed the most work. I guess the edits were to your taste? <g> Actually, the whole "prove it" angle was her idea. You're awesome, DJ! I hope you realize that.
I might just as well give up on the sequels because Lisa put it far more succinctly. One of my favorite things about the show was how close Lois would come to figuring it out or how Clark would almost reveal himself. I loved both of them teetering on the edge. The diving board analogy was so good I just sat there grinding my teeth. Why didn't I think of that? Grrrrr.
Thanks, Nancy, for picking out two of my favorite lines. "Does your editor know you read that tabloid" and the conversation about how she was sure she'd recognize him as a regular guy.
Sheila - there is more. And probably some more carpet-yanking, too. <heh>
Thanks, Jackie! I'm glad you liked it.
JoJo - I did get my button! And I sent you a thank-you note. Good luck trying to read my itsy-bitsy handwriting. I'm not nearly as anal as it might appear.
Never fear, Ann, there are others in the series and the last one is going to be nfic.
Thanks also to Angelic Editor and Poussin for chiming in. Your words were very much appreciated.
Now I must go back to writing before DJ starts poking me. :p