Annie,

Remember when I told you that part 2 was my favorite part except for one other part... this was the one I was talking about <g>! OMG I loved the image of Lois cooking! I was ROTFLMAO just as much as the first time you showed it to me! And Clark, well, you know how much I love him... and this just proved how wonderful he is laugh .

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She licked the drop of the batter that had dripped onto her finger, preparing for the sweet taste of banana nut bread. Instead, it tasted like...toothpaste?
Uh-oh! I bet I know what she did <g>

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She rinsed the vegetables, then glanced down at her stack of recipes and extracted the one labeled, “Perfect Garden Salad.”
thumbsup I knew it all along <g>. He did totally see through Lana -- it was easy to go along with it than fight with her! Perfect.

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“To follow us down the street? I *knew* I saw you. I thought I was imagining things. I kept seeing you – sensing your presence, but I’d look up and you were gone. I thought maybe I was just seeing you because I wished you were there.”
LOL and awwwwww! I knew he had to know that she was there even if he wasn;t completely sure. I love the sensing your presence part. So sweet!

AND SMOOCHIES! YAY smoochies!

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“But she said you never get over your first love...” she whispered.

“She was right.”

Lois’ heart lurched in her chest. No. It couldn’t be. The way he was kissing her.... He couldn’t still be in love with someone else.

“But she wasn’t my first love,” he whispered, kissing her again. “You were.”
AWWWWWWW! So sweet, Clark.

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“I saved you from pasta,” he said, cracking a grin.
LOL! Great comic relief after smoochies and heavy thinking <g>

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“Umm... How was I supposed to know I should peel it?! Those things should come with instructions!”
ROTFLMAO!!!!!!!!!!!!! Onions should come with instructions! Food maker people should never assume that Lois Lane knows anything about how to prepare anything.

Oh my, a *cup* of baking soda in the banana bread... maybe if she wants banana big gross lump of disgustingness...

OMG Clark's reaction to the salad is incredible. I can't believe he didn't burst out laughing... but he is a much nicer person than I...

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he surreptitiously threw the stem pieces in the trash when he thought she wasn’t looking.
LOL! Clark is on a secret mission to rid all salads of inedible stem pieces.

OMG her reaction to cherry tomatoes is so funny!!! And no shaved carrots and the store. I laughed so hard that I am almost crying.

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Ridiculous visions of her Lady Gillette razor flitted through her head.
OMG! I do *not* even want to think about that image.

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“Well, it’s not that unbelievable if you know Lana.”
Sooo... the truth comes out... Lana really is a maipulative, lying... insert explicitive that means female dog. Just as I expected.

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You should have seen her face when she came barreling out of there! She barely even stopped to grab her coat. And then two seconds later, you waltz out looking like the cat who ate the canary.
LOL! Of course Lois could hold her own against Lana... it was more like Lois could thwap Lana with her little finger!

I can't wait for the final part. I want to see how Lana gets her come-uppance. I know I would be happy if you took something from Tank's book and inserted some kind of major wham for my favorite character to hate... i mean, come on, she is like the most horrible character... doesn't she deserve a wham???

- Alicia wink


Laura "The Yellow Dart" U. (Alicia U. on the archive)

"A hero is an ordinary individual who finds the strength to persevere and endure in spite of overwhelming obstacles." -- Christopher Reeve