Always love time travel premises, (Back to the Future :)and the idea of a younger Lois with fore-knowledge of both herself and future events should be interesting.
Also, as always, love your writing style, Shayne. A pleasure to read.
You asked what we'd like to see.
Please don't make this a crossover with Smallville. Keep Clark consistent with the Clark we saw in L&C:tNAoS. That doesn't mean, of course, that he will be exactly the same as he was when he 28 (is that how old he was when Nightfall hit?) - he's still got about 5-7 years of experience and understanding before he hits the Daily Planet.
So it'll be interesting to see Clark Kent at 20 or so. And especially interesting to see how (if?) he decides to go to the future.
How long since Clark was gone? 18 months or 700 days?
Lois's evening with her grandmother brought tears to my eyes - How many us wouldn't love to have than second chance?
And will you bring the young Clark to Metropolis sooner, rather than later in your story? Might be interesting to see the young Clark Kent in the 'fish out of water' scenario too.
Wasn't "Time and Again" a TV series? (totally OT, I know
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