Hi,
Great part!
Her father began. “You took your grandmother to get a mammogram last week. They found something.”
Lois felt her vision graying at the edges.
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“Lois? Are you listening to me?’
Blinking in confusion, Lois looked up. She felt a moment of horror.

Why she is forward in time?
She could try calling?
She’d lost six more months, and she didn’t even know what had happened with her grandmother. Lois felt bile rising in her throat as she tried to swallow.
Being there for her grandmother had been important to her. If she’d made it, Lois wanted to have been a part of that. If she didn’t…Lois had wanted to wring every last precious moment out of the time they did have together.
“What? “ Lois gritted out. Linda apparently still thought they were friends. She didn’t realize that Lois knew exactly what sort of woman she was.

Did she already sleep with the guy in college?

Did Linda already steal her story?
“Midwestern is playing Metropolis tomorrow night. Are you going, or aren’t you?”
Frowning, Lois wondered why Midwestern sounded so familiar.
Midwestern was a school in Wichita….the one that had given Clark a football scholarship.
“You couldn’t stop me,” she said.

Let's hope Clark went to college and got the football scholarship?
More ASAP, please.
MAF
