Great part, Shayne.

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It took her almost an hour to realize that she was near Metropolis.

She’d been driving in a fugue state for two days.
Curious ... It'd be interesting to find out what happened in those two days from Clark's perspective. Is the fender dent proof that Clark followed her and kept her from serious injury? Maybe they spoke and Lois discouraged Clark from seeing her again (thus getting his future and her future memory back on track).

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She’d always been able to wrap Perry around her little finger.
LOL, this is so Lois to expect everyone else to bend to her will, regardless if they know her or not. laugh

What a interesting twist to have Lois mess up her internship with the DP because of her desire to see Clark. Love how she's building her portfolio by selling freelance.

I liked how you showed Lois dealing High School -- petty, yet unavoidable -- and rotflol Lois' job at Weenie World. It's stuff like that that makes me appreciate my grown-up job. laugh

I'm glad that Lois didn't permanently lose her future knowledge. Perhaps Lois will jump ahead to times in her life she most wishes to change. Maybe that's what took her ahead now - she successfully saved her grandmother or the diagnosis could have brought her family closer together.

I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings.
BJ