Hi Shayne,
I'm really enjoying this! And I really liked this line for some reason:
Her younger self was an idiot. This was something that should have been apparent from the romantic choices she’d made back in the day.
A teenage Lois Lane would never call herself an idiot and an adult LL wouldn't either, but I can see an adult LL calling her teenage self an idiot.
I hope that makes sense?
Looking forward to more!
