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The one thing Clark couldn’t understand was this business with two bodies. The rest of it made sense…too much sense. But Lois seemed as sincere in this as she did everything else.
The second body is clearly one of the clones. Nicely done.

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Lois pointed to one. “If the flying doesn’t clue you in, this will. He wears this on his chest.”

It was the symbol that had come with his baby blanket.
Very nice. Proof that he is Superman in a way that goes right past Lois. Very well done.

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On day two hundred fourteen, the news had gone out across the globe. Shiva was coming.
Shayne This is very well done and it leaves so much scope for sidebar stuff.

So clearly Clark needs protect Lois. But How?
  • Clark becomes Superman early?
  • Lois leaves town, changing schools?
  • Lane and Kent write a story that takes down the Metros? Perhaps exposing Luthor as well?
  • They get married and travel the world? (They can come back in time to take down Luthor and stop Nightfall and Shiva.)




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“If it’s even me that’s running things in 1993. How do I know it won’t be her…the idiot?”
“The idiot?”
“The one person in the universe who’s even more of a screw-up than I am…my seventeen year old self!” Lois grabbed her bank statement and stuffed it back into her pocket. “It’s obvious that she doesn’t have all my memories, or she’d BE me. But what she’s been doing….I’d have thought I had more sense.”
Maybe but maybe she is trying to get on the inside and take them all down, it may be the only way she thinks she can get the Planet to notice her.

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Lois was still holding him tightly when she looked up. “I’ve wasted most of my life, and there’s no guarantee that we’ll live to the morning.”

She kissed him, and for the first time in his life Clark found something as good as flying.
No. Please no, huh </font><hr /></blockquote><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif"> Shiva--a 30 billion-ton comet set to hit earth with the force of 250,000 H-bombs
A gigantic asteroid the size of a mountain


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