No time and no internet connection, but as long as I'm here...
I love this story so much and te only thing wrong with it is that the chapters are too short and they all end with cliffies that leave us going wha?? until the next one.
Now, this may seem like a good thing in some cultures, but I don't thin I can handle any more cliffhangers. I'm positively anti-cliffie, by now.
*Chains Shayne to the computer and howers over her, glowering and weildig a pitchfork until she posts the next part*
Shiva, eh? I thought you'd named it after the Hindu God of Destruction, Lord Shiva.

“Is he dead, Lois?”

“No! But I was really mad and I wanted to kick him between the legs and pull his nose off and put out his eyes with a freshly sharpened pencil and disembowel him with a dull letter opener and strangle him with his own intestines but I stopped myself just in time!”
- Further Down The Road by Terry Leatherwood.