Well, let me repost some comments, just in case you did miss mine. I really liked the story, from beginning to end. And keeping Superman under wraps until Nightfall threatened was a brilliant stroke, because it would pretty much disarm all the "alien invader" nonsense from Bureau 39 and most of the other kooks. And I wonder how much Perry will like Lois after all.
“He didn’t start with the Gecko story, did he?” The woman asked.
Too funny.
Well, when's the epilogue? I mean, aren't you going to tell us what they did with Tempus? And will they spank HG and tell him to find some other sandbox to play in?
