No time for detailed feedback, but I love the feel you tagged on at the end. The honeymoon suite scene was indeed sweet. Nice to know that not everything is the same between the worlds. I love that Lois can't keep her mouth shut about missing out on the internship, and I love how she ingratiates herself with a little Elvis comment. I like how Lois writes down a number she knows Perry can afford (their formal salaries, I suspect), and I love how Lois is paid better than Clark. Too funny. (If I write it all in one paragraph, I feel like I'm spending less time. Does it work?)
I'm with Pam. I had to read that section a second and almost third time before I fully understood the exchange. It sounded like the kind of thing a married couple would say, since they already know the details, but this fly on-the-wall wanted it clearer.
Elisabeth
