Hi,
I've just read the first two parts of this story and I'm very eager to read more.
New beginnings are different and you've made yours very interesting. I'm already hooked on the lives of this Lois and Clark and wonder how you're going to treat the creation of Superman.
Lois already knows something is unusual about Clark, though she's had too many distractions to figure out just what... yet. Will this Lois help Clark create our super hero? I'm sure she'll certainly put two and two together when Superman does appear.
Looking forward to seeing how your story plays out... and a sequel. That's even better. I'm kinda into sequels.
Yours Jenni
