Once again you've taken a very original slant and made it work very well. It says a lot for your talents.
I'm not a fan of the Buffyverse, nor am I very familiar with it (though you'd have to have been locked in a box not to have gotten some inferences over the years by the sheer volume of 'Buffy' coming at you). Even so, your story held up quite well. You were able to give us a clear enough picture of the 'supporting cast' without the need for intimate knowledge,yet not include so much as to bore those who were familiar with that world. A fine line to walk.
Overall a very satisfying story. One that gives us an interesting alternate Lois. It was fun to see her and Clark's relationship grow as 'equals'.
As always, looking forward to more.
Tank (who wonders if slayer traits are passed genetically... a superslayer?)
