Shayne,
I think everything I want to say has been said already, but I figure in praise there can never be too much. :-) I think this is one of the best crossover stories I've read in terms of melding two very different and slightly incompadible universes together to make a story with punch and remarkable cohesion. I think you got the balance between the two very well, with the Buffyverse playing a strong supporting role. Most of all, you have been true to Lois and Clark as characters, exploring how they would react thrown into the Buffyverse at that point in their relationship. That is what makes a good crossover, and that is why this crossover works well. I think you also did a great job of exploiting all the baddies that the Buffyverse has to offer to really make an intense action story that you balanced effectively with a great romance. And then you topped it off with that great epilogue. I have to admit that I was skeptical that you would be able to tie up the emotional carnage created by the story in a one-part epilogue, but I shouldn't have doubted. I would love to see you dabble further in this crossover universe you have created, but you tied up the story well, and it stands alone without need of a sequel. (But please don't let that stop you from writing more in this playground if you have the whim.)
Okay, I think I'm done gushing. Thank you so much for this wonderful thrill-ride of a story. Looking forward to what you come up with next.
Hutch
