I was very suprised to read some of this feedback.
I feel that everyone has a right to an opinion and although both TOC and Framework's words are true, that doesn't always mean there is a "wrong" and "right" way to write up fictional characters.
I think this fandom is often spoiled with tales of Lois and Clark in love, happy endings and even when wrong choices are made, it always works out for the best.
Other fandoms tend to take their characters out to play a little more than we do on this board. I think changing the story dramatically is making more of a statement than the actual story itself (and thats not a bad thing). I, for one, am glad to see debating going on about these character choices and whether they are justified or not.
I hope the hard hitting comments do not discorage you, but help to fuel you to write more. I know how hard writing a story of any kind can be, and to put a whole new spin on a story we all know and love takes courage. You should be commended if not anything.
I like where this story is going. I hope the next part is up soon!
~Lois Lane Wanna Be
