Cool beans!
Love the scene with Perry, that was the only way she'd be able to have any hope of staying at the Planet. Nice dialogue.
I also loved the way she planned out the whole gangster encounter! Bumping Clark outta the way and oops! getting shot..gotta love that gal!
Lois clenched her jaw against the pain, then strained to speak. "Give it a few more seconds."

LOL!
I hope that the wrap up will be what I'm hoping for? How WILL you finish this?!
~Liz