Oh, boy, but I'm loving this, Tank. What a fascinating, intriguing universe you've set up here - I agree though that there's plenty of scope here for more than just one more segment, so curious to see how you wrap this one up.
From a very funny initial segment you've moved on to produce some genuinely poignant moments among the fun and a Lois who is admirable in her attempts to deal with all the shocks.
In this last segment, I especially loved Clark's awe of his new partner's knowledge and those last two lines were absolutely perfect. Wonderful! LOL.
Looking forward to the final part...and hoping perhaps for a sequel at some point. This is just too good to miss out on.
LabRat
