I liked the edited version, too. I loved the addition of Superman's letter to Clark's parents, and the fact that - as Elisabeth pointed out - both Clark and Lois are now dying of curiosity.

There was another little thing that seemed like a change to me:

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Lois nodded in Clark's direction just as he walked straight into the corner of a desk. She watched as he winced, rubbing his thigh. He was going to have a nasty bruise.

“Oh, brother,” Perry muttered. “Well, you be careful.”

He started toward the elevator again. “Good night,” he said as he stepped inside the elevator.

Lois nodded and went back to her work. She wondered a little at Clark's clumsiness. He had won awards as a high school and college quarterback. Clumsy people didn't do that.
Clark's clumsiness - could that signal that his powers are coming back? He doesn't know how strong he is.

Good part. I liked it.

Ann