Oh, C_A, this is haunting. And Clark's reaction to Lois's surprise declaration is wrenching. The only part I'd like to see is Lois's full reaction. We only got to see the moment the light bulb went on. You didn't show her unscrewing the bulb and forcing Clark's fingers into the open aperture for a huge shock. You didn't show us Lois forcing Superman to eat that light bulb she was holding in her hand. And you didn't show us Lois storming into her bedroom to change clothes so she could throw Clark's sweatshirt back into his face.
Or, maybe you ended it at exactly the right time, because that way we all get to imagine what Lois does in the next ten minutes. May your muse stay around more! The two of you do really good work together.
