C_A, if this is what your writing is like with a rusty muse, I can't wait to see what you produce when it's all warmed up.
This was a wonderful little story with very well rendered characters. The emotions both Clark and Lois are feeling come through very well and are believable. And the revelation was very nice - very believable given Clark's emotions at the time. I just wish we could have seen more of Lois' reaction.
On the other hand, that was a lovely place to end.
