It looks like I'm starting the feedback thread for this part then! Where's gr8shades?
I loved Kaylie's insecurity in the morning after realising she'd slept (in the literal sense) with Jon, and the full-blown-panic-babble mode was brilliant.
There was something amazingly sweet about Jon shooting Sproxton after being so adamant about not wanting to use a weapon, because he had kryptonite and was therefore killing Kaylie.
I can't wait for the next (and, sob, last) part!
- Alisha (who's happy about a sequel, but still determined to be sorry that Honesty's over!)