I think the plot is advancing really nicely in this chapter. The memory wiping device is a really nice concept. I guess many people would be happy to get paid and not have to work for it but I guess Jay really just wants to help the country. I think he is growing on me.
I suspect Kaylie's Dad already knows about supermans relationship with Lois and just hasn't quite connected the dots with Jon yet. It won't be long, I would guess, before he figures it out. He's a clever cookie.
I enjoyed seeing how nervous Kaylie was about introducing Jon to her dad. That first introduction is a nerve wrecking moment for the most of us, but imagine introducing Supernova to a secret agent and youu have an explosive combination of untruths and expert lie detection.
Anyway, great work. I loved it!
