Overall the story was well done and an enjoyable read. It was fun watching the awkwardness of Lois and Clark as they had to get used to being together again.
I'm never happy to see Lois with anyone else (unless its me!) but John seemed like an okay guy.
I guess I can almost accept the happy ever after ending, since they are to be expected in this fandom and you did a good job of almos making me believe it. But I still have a bit of trouble with Lois ever really getting past ten years of letting her believe Clark had died. Especially given what a rough time she had for so long.
Still, it was developed well enough to sort of gloss over that betrayel and allow for the happy ending.
An enjoyable read.
Tank (who can't really blame Lois for wanting to stay in San Diego vs. a New York-like Metropolis...much nicer climate)
