Wonderful story, Lynn! I love all the introspection from Lois, how she finds out the truth. And the way she watches that video over and over just to see Clark again, to find the blood and to realize the truth.
And I have to say, it's good to wait a few days between posting the next part. It keeps the suspense, and I don't mind that torture. Of course, it also makes sure I can easily catch up.
So great start. You can post more now!
Saskia