Originally posted by Sara K M:
But I am having a hard time with the whole "suspension of disbelief" issue." It's one of my main worries in this story - that the whole concept sounds too far out.
So clearly it is important to the tale. In that case perhaps you can have the characters, Lois, Clark, and a couple of the business reporters discuss how odd it all is. They could point out all the reasons it does not make sense to close the Planet. Perhaps you could have Lois float CP33's idea.
Originally posted by cp33:
My first thought was that Stern was in on the plan for the lawsuit and this was a way for him to make money on the Planet.
Having even the characters notice something can sometimes defuse the problem.
It's like saying to the reader, Yes I know this does not make sense but hang in there all will be revealed.
